Monday, November 30, 2009

NaNoWriMo comes to an end....what's next? A small tease!


So this morning, around 7:30 am CST I finished it. I passed the 50,000 word count mark on my NaNoWriMo novel. It was wonderful, it was amazing, it was about halfway finished. I kid you not, this story still has so much more to cover! Sheesh! But I found out a few things this year. First, not having a newborn at least doubles your chance for success. Second, waking up at the ungodly hour of 5am is possible if you have interesting people waiting for you. Third, my husband absolutely cannot sleep if I'm not next to him in the bed. So weird, but so nice when he's making coffee as I type!

Anyway, as I look back on what I've written over the past month (and try not to denigrate it) I'm happy that NaNoWriMo inspired me to try this again. And I've decided to stop ragging so much on my own writing and accept it for what it is, an escape.

Which got me wondering, what are those of you who wrote for NaNo (and even those of you who write non-fan-fic fiction) planning to do with the novel(s) sitting in your computer? Please let me know in the comments!!!

I have decided to edit mine and start posting it here. I have a few other commitments to take care of first (Christmas is right around the corner after all) but it's definitely on my to-do list.

So with that in mind, I'm posting the preface right now. It is still rough but it sets the background for the story and acts as a teaser of sorts. I hope you enjoy it!

In 1953, Dr. Eric Loveland, wrote a book making another case for eugenics. Though the topic was considered taboo by many, tainted by Nazism and the Holocaust, Dr. Loveland still felt that society could benefit from shining the rational light of science onto the irrational behaviors of the heart. The backlash against the book caused the doctor to be shunned in all intellectual societies and ultimately cost him his tenure and chair of the Harvard Department of Biological Chemistry.

Embittered, Dr. Loveland left the east coast and moved with his wife, Jane, and a select group of followers to his private South American compound, Coquimbo. The size of a small country, Coquimbo offered an amazing variety of geography: mountains that ran to snowy heights in one direction and to crystalline blue ocean waters in the other. Inland, the land was fertile and rich, providing its owner the ability to grow nearly anything, from wine grapes to palm trees, corn to orchids. By the ocean, the waters were placid and clear, wonderful for fishing, sailing and scuba diving to see the diverse exotic marine wildlife. It was Eden. It was the perfect place to start anew.

That’s precisely what Dr. Loveland and his band of dreamers did: they created a utopia, a wonderful world where the ills of the outside world were eliminated, where every person was wanted, loved and absolutely essential to the fabric of society. And when the flu pandemic of 1968 decimated the world’s population, leaving whole countries in ruins and most of the earth in apocalyptic abandonment, isolation saved the inhabitants of Coquimbo So, while the rest of the world was a lost wasteland, Coquimbo began to thrive.

After one hundred fifty years, Coquimbo was a bustling miniature metropolis. The benefits of “creating a selective society” had bloomed and Lovelandians, as they called themselves, were reaping the rewards of their leader’s dream. Coquimbo was a country where every person grew up knowing their role and feeling secure in the belief that everything they needed for a full and happy life would be provided – from the mundane, food and shelter, all the way down to the ideal profession and their genetic soul mate. It was perfect and everyone was happy.

13 comments:

Nachos4Children said...

This sounds freaking amazing. I love this kind of stuff.

As ideal and and wonderous as Coquimbo sounds, I'm sure that still waters run deep and that perhaps things are not as perfect as they seem.

*chills*

bierbeck said...

So I am totally confused about this whole NaNoWriMo thing? I have heard you guys talking about it all month and I know you were supposed to write so many words a day, but then what happens with the end result? Do you submit them somewhere? Is it a contest? I would love to read them. Can you please explain? Thank you!

One Pushy Fox said...

@N4C - I'm glad you're intrigued! I hope it edits well. :)

@bierbeck - I'm so sorry I assumed everyone knew! My bad!!!! NaNoWriMo stands for National Novel Writing Month and the entire goal is to attempt to write a novel in a month. You compete against yourself; so when I say I won I mean that I wrote more than 50,000 words in the last month.

What happens with the end result is up to the author. I've decided to edit my massive word vomit and post it (since I've talked about this thing ad nauseum for the past month). In past years I have unceremoniously saved it off in my computer and promptly forgotten it. It's really just the author's preference/confidence level.

Does that help? Hope so!!! :)

bierbeck said...

Thank you for explaining. I am glad you have decided to post it. I have heard(seen) you all talking about it and would love to read it!

Danny said...

Well you have me, you are talking about genetics I have to read that girl!!

congrats to 50,000 you can be super proud of yourself !

I hope you'll tell where I can read it?

Angela Lynn said...

An europium society. I love this idea!! I can't wait to read more. =)

Did I tell you today how proud I am of you?! Well I am.

So question for the dumb: Is 50,000 words a novel or novella? I was looking this up a while back, and I could never figure it out.

And while we are at it: What's a short story? LOL This was another thing I couldn't figure out as well. I was very confused and just had a ton of words on my hands! lol

Okay I'm tried. The End to this retarded comment. =)

I heart you foxy one.

Angela Lynn said...

Please forgive the sleepy. Utopian society. That's what I said. hehehehhe

Honolulu Girl-Suz said...

Ok, your writing is very intelligent and engaging. I saw this posted on the Nano site and was completely blown away. Why are you trying to have it published? Even if it doesn't pan out, I think you have a fabulous story and you should have it copyrighted before posting online. That's just my opinion because I think you are a good writer. I am only half way done too and first goal, is to finish. Then we'll see...

One Pushy Fox said...

@HG - Thanks for the compliments!! I'm with you on the goal of finishing it. Tee-hee! As for attempting to publishing it, I hadn't given that much thought because it's so far from my normal story ideas (usually romance novely). Once it's completed and polished, I might give it a whirl, just to see what the process is like.

As for posting it, I don't think that precludes me from attempting to publish it later should I choose. I did a little online research (a VERY little) and I didn't see anyone saying posting in on a personal blog first would ruin your chances at potential publication.

Thanks again!!!

uhyesplease said...

oh - you know I'll read whatever you write!

I think the scary part of posting this on the lovely internet are peeps that steal such great ideas and tweek a bit and call them their own. Not that I really care about my FanFic - but it's kinda scary if you're thinking of writing some kind of a novel.

Anyway...CONGRATS on finishing! I'm still not sure if mine will actually see the light of day. Depends how editing pans out. I may end up with a whopping 100 words after I'm done. But they will be a fantastic 100 words, I'm sure.

Love you!

52 Faces said...

a NaNo winner who's also a Twihard - I'm definitely following you!

Congrats :) That big ol' orange logo was so awesome to see this year, wasn't it?

Fulanki! (that's the word verification below)

52 Faces said...

Oh and I'm not sure if I'm supposed to wait a while or jump on the NaNo revising...

I guess I'm ready to jump on it. I feel some urgency.

One Pushy Fox said...

@52 Faces - Welcome! Definitely jump right into your revising. It's best to do it when you still have the story so fresh in your head. I take it that you were a winner, so CONGRATULATIONS!!!! It's an amazing accomplishment. :)

 
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